From: Mischa POSLAWSKY <perl@shiar.org>
Date: Tue, 30 Jun 2015 23:52:56 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: sc: minor textual changes to legend
X-Git-Tag: v1.8~68
X-Git-Url: http://git.shiar.nl/sheet.git/commitdiff_plain/404e22b1cbd263a81f4965764b333b1329262d36?hp=e0cedf658d40795d202f5d0ca54938ee2312a4ac

sc: minor textual changes to legend
---

diff --git a/sc.plp b/sc.plp
index 723a633..4dda40d 100644
--- a/sc.plp
+++ b/sc.plp
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ sub showrangeint {
 
 <dl>
 <dt>cost
-	<dd>minerals+gas required to create one unit
+	<dd>minerals and gas required to create one unit
 	<dd>includes total expenses if based on existing units
 <dt>build
 	<dd>relative time needed to create at least one unit
@@ -415,9 +415,8 @@ sub showrangeint {
 		and <span class="unit-composed">+</span>parent units
 <dt>size
 	<dd><span class="unit unit-supply">T</span>ransports can fit upto
-		<span class="unit unit-s">8</span>
-		non-<span class="unit unit-air">F</span>lying units
-	<dd>number of command points taken per unit
+		8 non-<span class="unit unit-air">F</span>lying cargo units
+	<dd>number of command points taken while alive
 	<dd><:
 if ($scver{major} > 1) {
 		:>received damage depends on
@@ -430,10 +429,11 @@ if ($scver{major} > 1) {
 	<dd>massive <span class="unit-massive">⚓</span> units
 		cannot be lifted or slowed and can break force fields<:
 } else {
-		:><span class="unit unit-o">o</span>rganic/<span class="unit unit-u">m</span>echanic unit
+		:>abilities may hit only <span class="unit unit-o">o</span>rganic
+		or <span class="unit unit-u">m</span>echanic targets
 	<dd>affected by <span class="unit unit-s">S</span>mall,
 		<span class="unit unit-m">M</span>edium, or
-		<span class="unit unit-l">L</span>arge unit damage<:
+		<span class="unit unit-l">L</span>arge damage<:
 } :>
 <dt>HP<dd>
 	total number of hitpoints (including shields)
@@ -448,11 +448,8 @@ if ($scver{major} > 1) {
 	<dd>reduction applies to initial damage, before size penalties
 		<small>(so a plasma hit of 12 to 4 armor large deals 2 damage, not ½)</small>
 <dt>attack
-	<dd>damage given per single hit
+	<dd>damage per single hit
 	<dd>some weapons fire multiple × times, multiplying armor penalties
-	<dd><span class="hurtrel">dps</span> indicates relative amount of damage
-		done in 1 second of <:= $scver{major} > 1 ? '<em>Normal</em> in-game time' :
-		'time on <em>Fast</em> game speed' :>
 	<dd>splash damage hits all objects nearby <span class="unit-splash">⁜</span>
 		or in a straight line <span class="unit-splash">+</span>.
 	<dd><:
@@ -463,14 +460,21 @@ if ($scver{major} > 1) {
 		Point Defense Drones<:
 } else {
 		:><span class="unit-l">*</span>explosive damage does only
-		50% damage to small units, 75% to medium, 100% to large
+		50% damage to <span class="unit unit-s">S</span>mall units,
+		75% to <span class="unit unit-m">M</span>edium,
+		100% to <span class="unit unit-l">L</span>arge
 	<dd><span class="unit-s">~</span>concussive/plasma damage does
-		25% to large, 50% medium, 100% to small units<:
+		25% to <span class="unit unit-l">L</span>arge,
+		50% <span class="unit unit-m">M</span>edium,
+		100% to <span class="unit unit-s">S</span>mall units<:
 } :>
+	<dd><span class="hurtrel">dps</span> indicates relative total amount of damage
+		done in 1 second of <:= $scver{major} > 1 ? '<em>Normal</em> in-game time' :
+		'time on <em>Fast</em> game speed' :>
 	<dd>targets <span class="hurt-g">▽</span>&nbsp;ground
 		and/or  <span class="hurt-a">△</span>&nbsp;air
 <dt>range
-	<dd>maximum range of weapon (note Sieged Tank also has a minimum range)
+	<dd>maximum hex distance a weapon can fire (note Sieged Tank also has a minimum)
 <dt>sight
 	<dd>range in which the unit detects other units
 	<dd><strong class="unit-detect">emphasis</strong> indicates ability to detect cloaked units
@@ -481,13 +485,13 @@ if ($scver{major} > 1) {
 	<dd>parentheses () indicate that it needs to be researched first
 	<dd><span class="magic-perma">passive</span> abilities are always enabled
 	<dd>hover for description
-	<dd>range is maximum range required to activate
-	<dd>cost is energy loss percentage on spawn and when fully charged
+	<dd>range is maximum distance allowed to activate
+	<dd>cost describes energy loss percentage on spawn and when fully charged
 </dl>
 
 <p>
-When two values are given (1-2), second value indicates attribute after all
-possible upgrades.
+When two values are given (1-2), the second value indicates the attribute
+after all possible upgrades.
 </p>
 
 </div>