sc: minor textual changes to legend

[sheet.git] / sc.plp

diff --git a/sc.plp b/sc.plp
index ac78eb622f897db4844d9fe6f6ed5dfca67eae8b..4dda40dbd64b46e96b1db8396aaf4ede70544456 100644 (file)
--- a/sc.plp
+++ b/sc.plp
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ sub showrangeint {
 
 <dl>
 <dt>cost
-       <dd>minerals+gas required to create one unit
+       <dd>minerals and gas required to create one unit
        <dd>includes total expenses if based on existing units
 <dt>build
        <dd>relative time needed to create at least one unit
@@ -415,9 +415,8 @@ sub showrangeint {
                and <span class="unit-composed">+</span>parent units
 <dt>size
        <dd><span class="unit unit-supply">T</span>ransports can fit upto
-               <span class="unit unit-s">8</span>
-               non-<span class="unit unit-air">F</span>lying units
-       <dd>number of command points taken per unit
+               8 non-<span class="unit unit-air">F</span>lying cargo units
+       <dd>number of command points taken while alive
        <dd><:
 if ($scver{major} > 1) {
                :>received damage depends on
@@ -430,10 +429,11 @@ if ($scver{major} > 1) {
        <dd>massive <span class="unit-massive">⚓</span> units
                cannot be lifted or slowed and can break force fields<:
 } else {
-               :><span class="unit unit-o">o</span>rganic/<span class="unit unit-u">m</span>echanic unit
+               :>abilities may hit only <span class="unit unit-o">o</span>rganic
+               or <span class="unit unit-u">m</span>echanic targets
        <dd>affected by <span class="unit unit-s">S</span>mall,
                <span class="unit unit-m">M</span>edium, or
-               <span class="unit unit-l">L</span>arge unit damage<:
+               <span class="unit unit-l">L</span>arge damage<:
 } :>
 <dt>HP<dd>
        total number of hitpoints (including shields)
@@ -448,10 +448,8 @@ if ($scver{major} > 1) {
        <dd>reduction applies to initial damage, before size penalties
                <small>(so a plasma hit of 12 to 4 armor large deals 2 damage, not ½)</small>
 <dt>attack
-       <dd>damage given per single hit
-       <dd><span class="hurtrel">dps</span> indicates relative amount of damage
-               done in 1 second of <:= $scver{major} > 1 ? '<em>Normal</em> in-game time' :
-               'time on <em>Fast</em> game speed' :>
+       <dd>damage per single hit
+       <dd>some weapons fire multiple × times, multiplying armor penalties
        <dd>splash damage hits all objects nearby <span class="unit-splash">⁜</span>
                or in a straight line <span class="unit-splash">+</span>.
        <dd><:
@@ -462,14 +460,21 @@ if ($scver{major} > 1) {
                Point Defense Drones<:
 } else {
                :><span class="unit-l">*</span>explosive damage does only
-               50% damage to small units, 75% to medium, 100% to large
+               50% damage to <span class="unit unit-s">S</span>mall units,
+               75% to <span class="unit unit-m">M</span>edium,
+               100% to <span class="unit unit-l">L</span>arge
        <dd><span class="unit-s">~</span>concussive/plasma damage does
-               25% to large, 50% medium, 100% to small units<:
+               25% to <span class="unit unit-l">L</span>arge,
+               50% <span class="unit unit-m">M</span>edium,
+               100% to <span class="unit unit-s">S</span>mall units<:
 } :>
+       <dd><span class="hurtrel">dps</span> indicates relative total amount of damage
+               done in 1 second of <:= $scver{major} > 1 ? '<em>Normal</em> in-game time' :
+               'time on <em>Fast</em> game speed' :>
        <dd>targets <span class="hurt-g">▽</span>&nbsp;ground
                and/or  <span class="hurt-a">△</span>&nbsp;air
 <dt>range
-       <dd>maximum range of weapon (note Sieged Tank also has a minimum range)
+       <dd>maximum hex distance a weapon can fire (note Sieged Tank also has a minimum)
 <dt>sight
        <dd>range in which the unit detects other units
        <dd><strong class="unit-detect">emphasis</strong> indicates ability to detect cloaked units
@@ -480,13 +485,13 @@ if ($scver{major} > 1) {
        <dd>parentheses () indicate that it needs to be researched first
        <dd><span class="magic-perma">passive</span> abilities are always enabled
        <dd>hover for description
-       <dd>range is maximum range required to activate
-       <dd>cost is energy loss percentage on spawn and when fully charged
+       <dd>range is maximum distance allowed to activate
+       <dd>cost describes energy loss percentage on spawn and when fully charged
 </dl>
 
 <p>
-When two values are given (1-2), second value indicates attribute after all
-possible upgrades.
+When two values are given (1-2), the second value indicates the attribute
+after all possible upgrades.
 </p>
 
 </div>